tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8692381608294018617.post1989497544497838197..comments2023-11-05T07:27:43.837-05:00Comments on Narrative and Technology: Haunted and House of LeavesAdamhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16302919444091859459noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8692381608294018617.post-64677575967874006892013-11-14T13:47:05.477-05:002013-11-14T13:47:05.477-05:00This essay strikes me as both detailed and clever....This essay strikes me as both detailed and clever. I would have preferred that you focus on fewer topics - either write about the relatively upbeat character, or the web of architectural references, or the echo. Addressing all of the above at once felt more than a little disconnected to me.<br /><br />That being said, I thought you handled all three topics well in a very constrained space. I would have liked more about how the music leads us to a focus on personal relationships - that's a good idea that could have gone farther.<br /><br />FYI, the older male voice is generally/always the voice of their father, who was a polish filmmaker of some importance - if you were inspired to do a final project, that's relevant information.Adamhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16302919444091859459noreply@blogger.com