tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8692381608294018617.post3212818274233416272..comments2023-11-05T07:27:43.837-05:00Comments on Narrative and Technology: Man and MachineAdamhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16302919444091859459noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8692381608294018617.post-83832235689390081142009-01-29T11:26:00.000-05:002009-01-29T11:26:00.000-05:00We'll treat this as a rough draft, since nobody co...We'll treat this as a rough draft, since nobody commented on it, which is probably my fault.<BR/><BR/>Anyway, this is *very* scattered. You are dealing with various details of an exceptionally complicated passage, which you aren't actually reproducing for us, so while you have some interesting thoughts, it's hard to follow your *overall* line of thought. Why pick this passage? Why deal with so many subtopics, rather than picking a much shorter passage in greater depth? Your discussion of DNA was smart and interesting, but then it just abruptly stopped, and you shifted to another subject. You need a more organized response to a (probably) shorter passage for your potential here to be realized.<BR/><BR/>When you post a revised version, send me an email to remind me to grade it.Adam Johnshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11588769281227456640noreply@blogger.com