tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8692381608294018617.post4900872708584497462..comments2023-11-05T07:27:43.837-05:00Comments on Narrative and Technology: Adamhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16302919444091859459noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8692381608294018617.post-76501676839089716712008-11-23T15:21:00.000-05:002008-11-23T15:21:00.000-05:00You start out with a great deal of generalization ...You start out with a great deal of generalization and summarization of the overall story, which is a problem. Your discussion of Jimmy writing actually turns out rather well, though - if the whole paper had been in this vein, it would have been very solid. As it is, it's more of a mixed bag.Adam Johnshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11588769281227456640noreply@blogger.com