tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8692381608294018617.post499386734904205122..comments2023-11-05T07:27:43.837-05:00Comments on Narrative and Technology: Graded Blog #3Adamhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16302919444091859459noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8692381608294018617.post-10443978055501216102008-01-31T13:51:00.000-05:002008-01-31T13:51:00.000-05:00Your focus here is great - you're zeroing in on pe...Your focus here is great - you're zeroing in on perhaps the most startling, provocative and frustrating thing Lyotard says in an essay (story) which is absolutely full of startling, provocative and frustrating things. So I admire your focus.<BR/><BR/>The difficulty here, though, is that you spend much of your post wresting with _our_ definition of technology, before revealing that you know what _Lyotard's_ definition is: information processing. From my point of view this means that you've wasted considerable effort that could have been better expended, for instance, by challenging or developing his definition of technology, or showing how it _relates_ to the definitions I have given.<BR/><BR/>As much as I like your focus, I feel like you're only really getting started towards the end.Adam Johnshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11588769281227456640noreply@blogger.com