tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8692381608294018617.post6521588931306113775..comments2023-11-05T07:27:43.837-05:00Comments on Narrative and Technology: Formal Blog 6Adamhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16302919444091859459noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8692381608294018617.post-84534804244381306972008-02-21T14:18:00.000-05:002008-02-21T14:18:00.000-05:00This is a nice, but somewhat scattered discussion ...This is a nice, but somewhat scattered discussion of several distinct technologies in the novel. I think you have a good handle on all of them, but at least part of me thinks that you could have done more (and addressed part b of the assignment, which you didn't do) by focusing on just one of the three.<BR/><BR/>For instance, is there anything in our world with the Penfield Mood Organ correlates to? Many of us use drugs (illegal and legal) and therapy to regulate our feelings, for instance. You even start to move in that direction by acknowledging that this is a world in which people are addicted to technology...<BR/><BR/>I like what I see, but more focus would have made it even better.Adam Johnshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11588769281227456640noreply@blogger.com