tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8692381608294018617.post8300079301307740301..comments2023-11-05T07:27:43.837-05:00Comments on Narrative and Technology: CYOA rough draftAdamhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16302919444091859459noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8692381608294018617.post-26617217000261924442008-03-05T17:01:00.000-05:002008-03-05T17:01:00.000-05:00This sounds pretty good so far. I am guessing the...This sounds pretty good so far. I am guessing the blank pages are just what isn't done yet. I think a lot of people can relate to being in this application situation. Everything sounds pretty realistic as well, like getting caught with a fake i.d., parties getting busted, taking drunk friends home, etc. It is a lot more realistic than some of the CYOA's we have read in class (I didn't manage to kill myself, or get shot or anything!) I am interested to see what would happen if you go up and talk to the "pretty cross dresser."<BR/><BR/>This isn't too hard to read, just a lot of scrolling, which is understandable since it is a blog. I think it would be easier to read maybe in a powerpoint presentation so you could just click on what slide to go to next. <BR/><BR/>One thing that would get me interested a little more would be more risks. While some of the things you have are risks, they aren't risks that will get you in serious trouble. Like how we talked in class, some people read CYOA's so that they get make bad decisions and escape the real life consequences. <BR/><BR/>If I think of anything else, I will add it.Courtneyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09293178298729115705noreply@blogger.com