tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8692381608294018617.post856130702577315285..comments2023-11-05T07:27:43.837-05:00Comments on Narrative and Technology: Option 2Adamhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16302919444091859459noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8692381608294018617.post-71366090092328165482008-10-28T15:21:00.000-04:002008-10-28T15:21:00.000-04:00This essay ends abruptly, and you might have been ...This essay ends abruptly, and you might have been better off asking *why* Haraway made things so difficult (which is what the prompt called for, I'm 99% sure!). You also make some weird mistakes e.g. - "that socialism was the same as technology this could explain cyborgs." "The social" is not the same as socialism! I have no idea what made you make this leap.<BR/><BR/>So, your argument is underdeveloped and you make some strange mistakes.<BR/><BR/>On the other hand, you picked a good passage and did a pretty thorough job explaining its sources. For this passage, and for your approach to it, I think that explaining the context was arguably more important than finishing your own argument, although doing so would have been a nice touch.Adam Johnshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11588769281227456640noreply@blogger.com