Basically what was suggested to me on my paper from both of my partners in the group was that they would like to see me explain the significance of the fair in terms of what it did to Jimmy's psychological effect. I explained the effect it had on the world and I will look in to their suggestion and see what I can revise for the final copy.
Kevin did a really good job on his project and it looked very good when we went to the computer lab to see it work.
Ryan's rough draft was short and the only suggestions I made to him was to explain more in depth his arguements which in his draft he said he was planning on doing.
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