The main suggestion I got in class was to refocus myself on the main point of my paper being that the Holodeck is an ultimate form of interactive narrative. I haven’t spent enough time talking about how it is interactive fiction. I also need to restructure the paper a little bit because now it seems more than a little disorganized. Other suggestions I got were to give more examples from Joy’s article, and to talk about current technology that resembles something like the Holodeck.
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