Wednesday, October 23, 2013

Prompt 1

Prompt 1: Images in Jimmy Corrigan
            To be honest, Jimmy Corrigan: The Smartest Kid on Earth is the first comic book I have ever read. However, knowing a decent bit about super-hero culture I understand how they work and the purpose they serve. If you are young boy growing up loving Batman and Spiderman, you would much rather see these heroes fight their respective villains than read about it. For kids especially, pictures can be worth so much more than words ever could. I think this is the reason Ware chose this medium to present the story of Jimmy Corrigan. Jimmy is essentially a boy stuck in a man’s body. Whether it is his mother who treats him like he is still eight years old, or Jimmy’s social inabilities with women, Jimmy does not function like a normal adult. With this being said, the picture I chose (Image 1) subtly displays a theme in only three small frames.
Image 1
            In my image, I believe the three pictures are trying to represent Jimmy’s struggle to achieve the American dream. Before we can analyze the picture or other hints of the theme in this book, we need to know what exactly the American dream is. To me the American dream is the idea that in America if you put in your time and work hard you will achieve happiness. Happiness is different for all individuals. While some seek power or wealth, most, like Jimmy, seek companionship. The story highlights many times how he desperately wants a friend or a lover and his social inabilities make this nearly impossible.
            To fully understand the picture I have selected, we must understand the context it is presented. Jimmy is in the hospital being treated for a nosebleed. The way the nurse talks to him is like a child. However, this is not a bad thing to Jimmy. As a child at heart, he enjoys the way the nurse is taking care of him. For this reason he develops a crush for her. When the nurse comes back into the room Jimmy has a fantasy of him and the nurse running away together, getting married and growing old together as the picture shows. This desperate fantasy is outlandish, but tells us how much Jimmy is dying to find companionship. He spends only mere minutes with this woman yet he dreams of running away and becoming married to her. The reason this image is so appealing to me however is because of the final part of the image which is the house in the mountains.
            Reading Jimmy Corrigan I couldn’t help compare him to a similar character from another famous piece of American literature. This character is Lenny Small from the John Steinbeck classic Of Mice and Men. A huge similarity between Lenny and Jimmy is that they are both children in men’s bodies. Steinbeck adds a level of irony to accent this difference. Steinbeck makes Lenny a brutally strong man but is extremely timid because of a mental handicap. In Steinbeck’s novel, the main theme in the story is the quest to gain the American dream. This is symbolized by the farm which they plan to own someday and be free. For Jimmy Corrigan being able to marry the nurse and grow old with her would be his American dream. This is summed up by the house on top of the mountain we see in the lower tight frame of the image.
            I feel that the similarities between Jimmy Corrigan and Of Mice and Men are not a coincidence. The characters are too similar for Ware not to be making some sort of comparison. Jimmy and Lenny both have trouble with women. In Of Mice and Men Lenny has a very tough time talking to women and is at one time accused of raping a woman even though he didn’t and wasn’t intending to do the woman harm. Jimmy also has this trouble and is accused on the plane of staring at the woman’s breasts. The biggest connection to the book is made in the scene where Jimmy has a fantasy about killing a small horse. The way in which Jimmy tells Amos all the plans they have as Jimmy kills Amos is very similar to the way George Kills Lenny. I feel like Ware uses a farm animal as Amos to show that Jimmy’s hopes of that American dream are being killed.
            Jimmy Corrigan: The Smartest Kid on Earth, in my opinion, is a masterpiece. The fact that one man was able to put so much meaning into every picture and frame is truly remarkable to me. With only one divided frame, I was able to pick up a theme in the story. Ware does this many times throughout the book which is why Jimmy Corrigan is much more than your average comic.

            

3 comments:

Nikki Moriello said...

Hey Jared,
I think you have some really strong points throughout your essay, as well as a few weak ones. I think your argument and the image you selected for it are perfect and they complement each other better than most of the images in the book could have for your specific argument. I also like what you're arguing: that Jimmy really just wants companionship. I think to deem what Jimmy wants as the American Dream, however, you have to provide more information on what that is and what it means to Jimmy as well as to Ware. I think you definitely can argue that it is the American Dream, especially with the image that you've chosen to support your claims, but as your essay stands, I think calling it the American Dream is not upholding. The reason I say this is because the definition of the American Dream in your essay is a bit vague. It involves companionship and a vision of a house in the woods, but can't the American Dream be interpreted as something totally different? I think it can, but you can think of Jimmy's vision as the American Dream as long as you support it enough.
Also, I think you could definitely go deeper into why Jimmy desires companionship so badly and why he is so bad at social interaction and stuff like that. Your comparison to Lenny from Of Mice and Men, though, is extremely insightful. I think there is definitely a connection here and you provide specific support for it, which is awesome.
Overall, I think that you have a really good start to an essay that could make a great revision. You have a solid skeleton with the perfect image to characterize Jimmy and what he wants out of life, but you need to reorganize a few things.

Adam said...

It's hard to disagree that JC is a boy stuck in a man's body, although it's also hard to say that this argument rises above the obvious. The 2nd paragraph, though, takes us much, much closer to an interesting and worthy argument: asking what Jimmy's relationship is to the American dream is a great & insightful question, which can lead to all kinds of interesting places.

Your extended discussion of Ware vs. Steinback is a great idea (which had never occurred to me - but not in a bad way), with a problematic execution. You lay out the similarities in broad strokes, and I like the approach - but it seems like you feel the need to wrack up a quick list of connections (successfully, in all fairness), rather than really elaborating on them.

I like what you do - and yet, at the same time, I feel like a stronger argument is implicit - that you are trying to figure out what Jimmy's fantasies of nature (or at least "nature" in an agricultural setting) mean, given his thoroughly domesticated, urbanized life. Steinback might be a fine way of getting around to that point - of not only articulating the fantasy (which you're doing, more or less) and connecting it to Steinback (which you do), but of explaining what it means, and why it matters.

To put it another way: even in Steinback's time, but certainly in our own, the idea of farming/homesteading in true independence seems increasingly absurd (rightly or wrongly). Confronting the perceived absurdity of these fantasies - as well as simply elaborating on the role they play through the text - seems more important to me than simply connecting them with Steinback - although that was, in itself, a very useful exercise.

This is very much a draft, but a smart and productive one.

Nikki, as usual, has some very good insights.

Adam said...

It's hard to disagree that JC is a boy stuck in a man's body, although it's also hard to say that this argument rises above the obvious. The 2nd paragraph, though, takes us much, much closer to an interesting and worthy argument: asking what Jimmy's relationship is to the American dream is a great & insightful question, which can lead to all kinds of interesting places.

Your extended discussion of Ware vs. Steinback is a great idea (which had never occurred to me - but not in a bad way), with a problematic execution. You lay out the similarities in broad strokes, and I like the approach - but it seems like you feel the need to wrack up a quick list of connections (successfully, in all fairness), rather than really elaborating on them.

I like what you do - and yet, at the same time, I feel like a stronger argument is implicit - that you are trying to figure out what Jimmy's fantasies of nature (or at least "nature" in an agricultural setting) mean, given his thoroughly domesticated, urbanized life. Steinback might be a fine way of getting around to that point - of not only articulating the fantasy (which you're doing, more or less) and connecting it to Steinback (which you do), but of explaining what it means, and why it matters.

To put it another way: even in Steinback's time, but certainly in our own, the idea of farming/homesteading in true independence seems increasingly absurd (rightly or wrongly). Confronting the perceived absurdity of these fantasies - as well as simply elaborating on the role they play through the text - seems more important to me than simply connecting them with Steinback - although that was, in itself, a very useful exercise.

This is very much a draft, but a smart and productive one.

Nikki, as usual, has some very good insights.