I think the guy, at least, is reasonably well rounded. Maybe a little more sense of his personal history would be a helpful - and, on a more trivial note, I think his musical tastes could be a little more disturbing (to stay in the 90s vein where you have him, Skinny Puppy would be one nice choice, strictly by way of example).
Whoops, posted too soon. I do think the woman's character is a little flat - doing it as a fake page with some blog entries or something would help, although I'm not sure it should be your highest priority.
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