Here's a link to what I have so far of my rough draft (word doc).
Still want to incorporate a few more points from a couple of more sources that I have listed at the bottom as well as fix some stuff up for the final draft. Please leave some comments/suggestions.
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2 comments:
Here's a link to a version with comments:
http://docs.google.com/Doc?id=dcc3x9c8_24dxw4v2cw
Jacob,
I thought the discussion of artificial intelligence and debate of its reality was compelling and interesting, sources such as ELIZA and Chinese room were great and made me want to read more. I fee like the connection that is supposed to be made to interactive fiction is weak though. Also indefinite statements are never good in an essay where you are making a persuasive argument. A deeper focus on human interaction with machines would make a better essay and one I would definitely enjoy reading. I think what you have is good and expansion of the one aspect would result in a better essay.
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